in many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. to what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, there is an increasing number of senior citizens in many parts of the world.

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might be

due to

the appropriate health promotion strategies, improved treatments for diseases, and better understanding among

people

about how to live healthy lifestyles. Some

people

believe that

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number of

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elderly can benefit

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society,

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others argue that the phenomenon creates more problems for

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governments. I am one of those who believe in the latter and

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will support

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idea with some evidence in

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following essay. It is argued by some individuals that

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population

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societies in several ways.

For example

, older

people

have experienced more in their careers and lives, so they are more likely to perform more strategically and carefully in their jobs than their younger

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seniors can teach the young about their

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with more older

people

are

also

less likely to have accidents related to dangerous behaviours,

for example

, driving too fast on the streets, excessive alcohol consumption, and drug abuse, which are seen more frequently in areas with younger generation.

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society seem to outweigh the previously mentioned benefits.

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is seen in the rising trend of hospitalizations in areas with more older

people

,

as well as

the increased prevalence of chronic diseases. When there are

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younger

people

to take care of the elders, they are more likely to have accidents including falls and fractures. Poorer memory and cognition

also

make the old more prone to getting lost or harmed by those who want to take advantage of them. Mental health among the elders

also

becomes a great concern for the seniors who live alone.

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,

this

population

might be too old to

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labour, or their focus might not be clear and quick enough to work in monetary or major businesses. In conclusion,

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population

is becoming prevalent in many countries.

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leads to more risks than benefits to

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society so the government should have

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to protect

this

population

and ensure their living conditions are safe and appropriate. Meanwhile, steps should be taken to

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people

to have more children in these societies and the authorities should provide proper living conditions for

people

of all age groups.