The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the change in the seaside resort from 1990 to 2005 in terms of facilities and amenities.
Overall
,it can be observed that there have been significant changes made with the inclusion of accommodation and transportation.
Initially
,there were few shacks and only one apartment which was located on the
west
of the camp
along with
a major figure of trees in the vacant area.In the north, of the
resort
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there is a big house with some other condos and a small pond.
However
,there are two bridges which help to connect the
west
-east side of the resort.
In addition
, there was a hospital just beside the railway track in the east.Just opposite of hospital there is a school on the
west
with two trees and a house. More importantly, there is some drastic change in 2005 rather than 1990 in the 15 years time period.A number of buildings were converted into apartments on the north side of the camp beside the river flowing from south-north with a small pond.Just between the apartments, of north and ,south there is the construction of a supermarket with some small buildings.The railway roads
also
extended up to big dwellings in the
west
and the establishment of ferries in the southeast.Another change was near the school, trees were cut down in order to make an airport.There is
also
construction of the factory between the railway station in the east and the river in the
west
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words west with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • seaside resort
  • infrastructure improvements
  • tourist facilities
  • leisure areas
  • environmental impact
  • coastal line
  • green spaces
  • economic boom
  • sustainable development
  • urbanization
  • recreational activities
  • conservation efforts
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