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1.Some people say watching T.V is bad for children in all ways while others say it is good for children to get knowledge. Discuss both the views and give you opinion?

#people #v #children
Over the past few years, there has been a lot of debate over
peoples
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opinion
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opinions
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whether
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young
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the young
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 generation should be allowed to watch
television
 or not. I strongly advocate that
children
shall
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 be permitted to watch
television
. In
comparision
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comparison
 to the earlier era,
children
 of
this
 era learn a lot from what they see much faster than what they hear. There are myriad
of
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reasons that benefit the child
while
 watching
television
. Kids can watch
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 Geography channel, Animal Planet or the educational programmes that are being telecasted worldwide free of cost. Learning becomes a fun activity for them as it breaks the monotonous textbook learning patterns. The best example is the Abacus math
that is
 being taught on
television
 free of cost worldwide.
This
 enables the child to learn math quickly
while
 being entertained. A section of society believes that there are many pitfalls of watching
television
 box which they commonly refer
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 idiot box.
However
, there are many cons associated with excessive watching of the box. Primarily, the loop for watching continuously is addictive among
children
 and it never ends,
hence
, resulting in eye dryness.
In addition
 to that, it hampers the physical activity among
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young
children
 as they tend to sit and watch for hours.
According to
 the Health Organization of India, about 60% of teenagers are obese merely because of
lack
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 of physical activity. Despite many pros and cons, I support the fact that youngsters
shall
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 be given some time off from their education to enjoy their break but, not to the extent that it becomes a habit
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 watching the screen for hours.
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