The bar chart below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities, Derby and Nottingham, between 2000 and 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart below compares the
quantity
of dwellings constructed per Change the quantifier
number
year
in Use synonyms
Derby
and Use synonyms
Nottingham
from 2000 to 2009.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
number
of houses built in Use synonyms
Derby
plateaued twice over the time period. The first Use synonyms
plareau
Correct your spelling
plateau
occured
from 2000 to 2001 and the second time kept for five years between 2003 and 2007. One Correct your spelling
occurred
year
later, the quantity of lodgements constructed in Use synonyms
Derby
skyrocketed and reached a peak Use synonyms
at
2009. Change preposition
in
By contrast
, the quantity of housing built in Linking Words
Nottingham
Use synonyms
flactuated
during the decade.
Correct your spelling
fluctuated
fluctuate
According to
the information shown Linking Words
it
the graph, both cities experienced the most productive Correct your spelling
in
year
Use synonyms
at
2009, Change preposition
in
which
the Correct word choice
when
amount
of dwellings Change the quantifier
number
constructured
in Correct your spelling
constructed
Derby
peaked at almost 350 and the amount of that in Use synonyms
Nottingham
peaked at 250. Use synonyms
Besides
the aforementioned, the first plateau happened in Linking Words
Derby
stuck in the Use synonyms
number
around 40 and the second one remained in the amount around 110. At the other end of the spectrum, the account of houses built in Use synonyms
Nottingham
per Use synonyms
year
witnessed a Use synonyms
flactuation
with the lowest Correct your spelling
fluctuation
number
Use synonyms
about
10 and the highest Change preposition
of about
number
of 250.
Use synonyms
To sum up
, Linking Words
although
the Linking Words
number
of housing Use synonyms
constructured
in Correct your spelling
constructed
Derby
exhibited a plateau for two times , it never Use synonyms
decread
over the period, whilst the account of that in Correct your spelling
decreased
decreed
Nottingham
had a relatively unsteady tendency during the same period.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, derby, nottingham, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "plateau" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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