the graph below shows the annual visitor to new zealand from 5 countries for the years 1996 to 2014.

the graph below shows the annual visitor to new zealand from 5 countries for the years 1996 to 2014.
The given graph illustrates the annual visitor to New
Zealand
from 5 different countries between the
years
1996 to 2014.
Overall
, the most tourists have come from Australia and stayed constant all over the
years
, New
Zealand
having the most visitors from Australia,despite that USA
also
started to increase their visits to New
Zealand
slightly over the
years
.
Furthermore
, China is placed on the lowest
due to
the lack of visitors from China. New
Zealand
in 2005 had the most
expenditures
, over 2,500 and that only from Australian visitors , which are the first on the graph,
also
USA showed an increase in visiting New
Zealand
in 2010 with a number of over 1,500
expenditures
. UK,
also
had a slight increase over the
years
, between the
years
2008 respectively 2012 it stayed constant at 1000
expenditures
,
while
China had the lowest
expenditures
all over the
years
staying around 500
expenditures
remaining the
last
country on the list.
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