the graph below shows the annual visitor to new zealand from 5 countries for the years 1996 to 2014.
The given graph illustrates the annual visitor to New
Zealand
from 5 different countries between the years
1996 to 2014.
Overall
, the most tourists have come from Australia and stayed constant all over the years
, New Zealand
having the most visitors from Australia,despite that USA also
started to increase their visits to New Zealand
slightly over the years
.Furthermore
, China is placed on the lowest due to
the lack of visitors from China.
New Zealand
in 2005 had the most expenditures
, over 2,500 and that only from Australian visitors , which are the first on the graph,also
USA showed an increase in visiting New Zealand
in 2010 with a number of over 1,500 expenditures
. UK, also
had a slight increase over the years
, between the years
2008 respectively 2012 it stayed constant at 1000 expenditures
, while
China had the lowest expenditures
all over the years
staying around 500 expenditures
remaining the last
country on the list.Submitted by annadrezaliu on
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