Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

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Nowadays, all over the world, working long
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in spite of spending
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on leisure activities is becoming very popular.
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some people think the advantages of working long
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exist, other people think there are disadvantages of working long
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. From my point of view, I think the first perspective is the most persuasive, for the reason discussed below. On the one hand, as far as the advantages of working long
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are concerned.
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, to a large extent, especially in modern times, no matter where in the
work
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you live, you can be more efficient at
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,
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the
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that you
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more than your workmates, resulting in the
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that you can get a promotion.
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, and most importantly for me, you could save more money for your future projects leading to the
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that you will be able to do whatever you want.
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, you could afford a house or open a company.
On the other hand
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, there are reasons for working long
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has many disadvantages. First and foremost, by and large, all through your life, you cannot have
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for yourself
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the
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that you spend too much
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at
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, leading to abandoning your leisure activities.
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, in general, when your
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is omnipresent, you should feel more stressed resulting in the
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that you become angry and tired. In conclusion,
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some people think that working long
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has many advantages, other says that working long
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in spite of spending
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on leisure activities are better.
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, in my opinion, the first perspective is the most persuasive, to some extent, for the above-mentioned reasons.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • work-life balance
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • stress relief
  • productivity
  • economic growth
  • career progression
  • skill enhancement
  • quality time
  • financial security
  • leisure activities
  • physical health
  • personal relationships
  • stress-related illnesses
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