With
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of technology,
people
are
being changedWrong verb form
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their relationships with others and
this
incident
illustratesWrong verb form
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precisely by
lossCorrect article usage
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of connection between parents and children
due to
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video games,
as well as
social isolation
relyWrong verb form
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on social media usage, which
areVerb problem
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made tremendous effect on
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.
To commence with, being changed
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the interaction among individuals has
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impact
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society.
Firstly
, loss of
inter- personalCorrect your spelling
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relationshipFix the agreement mistake
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between parents and children. Cumulative utilization of electronic devices for video games
forChange preposition
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longCorrect article usage
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run
makeChange the verb form
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teenagers apart from family bonding, which leads to
discourageChange the verb form
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to learnChange preposition
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,
as well as
disrespect to their parents.
Secondly
, addiction to social media constantly
makeChange the verb form
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people
avoid
from Change preposition
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each other and
stayVerb problem
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stickWrong verb form
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with smartphones or computers to communicate or to entertain without paying
their Correct pronoun usage
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attention to the vicinity.
Consequently
,
this
development has
been Unnecessary verb
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affected
on Change preposition
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theirChange the word
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various connections in their life.
Furthermore
, being
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often in
this
way brings more drawbacks to
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personal lives,
such
as
interaction with juveniles
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their adults would be
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risk
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substance abuse because of loss of attention with their guardience might bring them more freedom to the kids allowing them to practice bad habits.
Moreover
, being
social connection
makeChange the verb form
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pole avoid
from Change preposition
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social responsibilities,
such
as engaging
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worksFix the agreement mistake
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, which is essential to community
.
For instance
,
people
in most developed countries tend to live individually as nuclear families without conducting any bond with others.
Therefore
,
this
evolution has brought many disadvantages to the
people
and community.
To conclude
according to
the above clarification, evolved innovations
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personal lives to deterorate bond with children and among
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further
, being
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of
thisCorrect determiner usage
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relationships lead teen to addict drugs and
people
apart from social responsibilities, which
are demonstratedWrong verb form
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negativeCorrect article usage
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impact.