The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph illustrates the number of visitors in and out

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in 20 years period,

whereas

the bar chart describes the trendiest countries visited by the citizens of the

in 1999. The units are measured in millions.

Overall

, tourists from or to the

increased significantly throughout the years, though travelling abroad by

residents was higher. The most famous country was France,

while

the least visited country was Turkey. The line graph indicates that from the beginning the

travelers

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from the

had a larger number

from

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than

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travelers

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to the United Kingdom. Both of them rose, but the number of

resident’s

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travelers

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was higher by approximately 30 million. The bar chart shows that the second

famous

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country after France was Spain, with only around 2 million difference.

For the

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USA, Greece, and Turkey,

they

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were the least

accordingly

with a huge gap between them and

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the first

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two cities, by about half

million

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differences between them.

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