The diagrams below give information about the Eiffel Tower in Paris and an outline project to extend it underground. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown.
The pictures explain the location of the renowned Eiffel Tower and an underground blueprint for an extension.
This
writing focuses on the location and some main interesting additions to the layout.
Overall
, the historical building is located further
west of the town and the scheme shows that there will be floors added to the foundation with some explanation of the existing measurement.
To start with, its unique feature was its height. Standing tall, it has 2 viewing platforms with 1.665 steps in between. Furthermore
, The first and second sightseeing spots were built at a distance of 50m from each other (57m and 115m from the ground respectively).
In addition
, 5 additional floors are projected to be built under the base of the heavy site. In extending to the 10.100 tonnes architecture, the plan is to add some tourist facilities, such
as a ticket office on the 1st level, shops, restaurants, a cinema, and museums on the 2nd and 3rd, and two parking lots in the very bottom area, as well as
a lift that can access all of the facilities.Submitted by twiggseducationbdg on
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