this diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. summarize the information and make a comparison . write at least 150 words.

this diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. summarize the information and make a comparison . write at least 150 words.
This
diagram illustrates the manufacturing process of instant
noodles
which was carried out in a certain factory
according to
a specific policy.
Overall
, it can be seen that eight steps must be followed in order to produce the final form of instant
noodles
.
To begin
, the storage of flour in storage silos was the first step,
whereas
labelling and sealing were the final stage of production.
In addition
to that, the second step was a mixing, as; oil, water, and flour must be mixed all together in a mixer until
dough
was formed.
Then
,
dough
was spread into sheets by using rollers, and
then
;
dough
sheets were converted to
dough
strips through a specific part of the manufacturing machine. After, that
dough
strips could be transformed easily into
noodles
via
noodles
discs where cooking oil could be added to
noodles
, and
then
; the drying process started.
Finally
, even though noodle preparation takes several steps, vegetables and spices could be prepared through fewer stages in specific small bags, and
then
; they can be placed with
noodles
into certain cups before sealing and labeling.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufactured
  • ingredients
  • dough
  • steamed
  • texture
  • flavor
  • cutting
  • shaping
  • dehydration
  • frying
  • cooling
  • seasoning
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • technological advancements
  • time-saving techniques
  • traditional noodle-making
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