The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

#information #professions #k #salaries #hours #week #profession #report #university #lecturer #summarise #features #comparisons

The bar chart

illustrate

Change the verb form

illustrates

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, the

salary

comparison for" police, nurse, firefighter and underground driver" in the UK when they are started and their

salary

after three years.

While the

Correct word choice

The

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table presents the average working

hours

per

week

for each role.

Overall

, we see from the information we have that there is a slight increase in the salaries after three years.

Furthermore

, the highest

salary

was for underground drivers and the lowest for nurses.

On the other hand

, the high average of working

hours

per

week

was for firefighters. In terms of

salary

, the chart shows a rise of around 1% for underground drivers, firefighters and nurses (50000 to 51000, 40000 to 41ooo and 18000 to 19000 pounds respectively).

While

the police

grow

Wrong verb form

grew

show examples

gradually from 21000 to 23000 pounds.

Moreover

, firefighters had the most extended about 55 working

hours

per

week

However

, the underground drivers had the lowest about 36 working

hours

per

week

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3Word repetition
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3Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

153 words

7.00

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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