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Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food?

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At present, an increasing number of consumers pursue
food
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 over their capacity.
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, there is more
food
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 left.
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 article will give several reasons why the
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 choose to do
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 and the measures to improve the phenomenon are listed as well. On the one hand, there are a lot of factors that contribute to
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 situation.
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 with,
people
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 lack the awareness of valuing
food
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 and they ignore the two facts. One is that various
food
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 needs the farmers' great efforts to plant. Another is that there still are many disadvantaged
people
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 facing the situation that they can't afford
food
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.
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, the
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 become unwise to pursue what they eat
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 the fact that they indulge in consumerism.
Lastly
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 , the package of
food
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 has fewer options for
people
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 to choose
.
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, one package of vegetable is too big for a single person and especially
this
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 kind of
food
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 get bad easily, so it's doomed that some of them would be left.
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, many actions could be taken to solve
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 problem.
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, the governments should offer more activities to enable the
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 to get a
further
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 understanding of the significance of the treasure of what we eat.
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. the administrators could organize the
residents
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 to watch related movies, with
such
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 interesting methods to remind the citizens of the necessity to pursue
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 depending on their ability.
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, the governments could call for supermarkets or other shops to allow consumers to choose the weight of
food
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 freely.
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, the community could offer more chances for the
residents
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 to engage in dealing with
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 kind of waste. By taking part in these tasks,
people
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 would know the complex processes for tackling waste. In conclusion, the waste of
food
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 has detrimental impacts on society which should be avoided to take place. A combination of government, companies and the community could be established to improve
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 situation.
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