The chart below shows the total number of international migrants in five countries between 2000 and 2020. The table shows the percentage of migrants in each country's population in 2020.

The chart below shows the total number of international migrants in five countries between 2000 and 2020. The table shows the percentage of migrants in each country's population in 2020.
The Data provide information about the size of foreign
migrants
in five
countries
during a 20-year period and their share in each country's
population
.
Overall
, the
number
of foreign
migrants
increased in
the
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Germany the UK and the USA where the
number
of
migrants
was higher. The two
countries
with the lowest percentage of
migrants
India and Russia experienced a decline in immigration over the period.
It is clear that
the three
countries
demonstrated a high upward trend in migrant
population
over time, the largest
number
of
migrants
lived in the USA around 35
million
in 2000 and 50
million
in 2020. It was the UK which showed the highest
number
of growth from 5
million
to around 9.5
million
over 20 year period. In ,Germany,
this
trend is about 8
million
and 11
million
in 2000 and 2020 respectively. Both India and Russia experienced a decline in their migrant
population
by 2020 falling to approximately 5
million
and 11
million
respectively. In 2020 the same three
countries
the UK, the USA and Germany had an identical share in the total size of the National
population
about an average of 14%
whereas
India's 0.4% and Russia's 8.1% were significantly lower.
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