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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose higher tax on this kind of food.

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Nowadays, there are lots of
people
 around the world who face serious health problems caused by unhealthy snacks. But what is the best way to deal with
this
 issue? A meaningful part of society believes that an increase in taxes on fast
food
 by the government could fight
this
 problem. I completely disagree with
this
 idea and in ,
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 I will support my idea with examples. First of all, higher prices on hamburgers and pizzas
wouldn’tbe
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wouldn’t be
a barrier for
people
, who couldn’t imagine their lives without
it
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. Some of them would pay a fortune to taste a favourite junk
food
,
while
 others would cook it simply at home in order to overcome the regulations. Another reason why I disagree is that forbidden fruit is sweet.
People
 won’t stop finding ways to deal with these strict rules. Probably, the implementation of begged taxes could even cause serious strikes.
On the other hand
, a tax solution could help some
people
 to give up on junk
food
, because they wouldn’t be ready to pay more for
this
 pleasure. In conclusion, I believe that imposing taxes on fast
food
 wouldn’t help as the only way to stop it may lie between the promotion of a healthy lifestyle and reasonable prices on fruits and vegetables.
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