In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose higher tax on this kind of food.

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Nowadays, there are lots of
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around the world who face serious health problems caused by unhealthy snacks. But what is the best way to deal with
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issue? A meaningful part of society believes that an increase in taxes on fast
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by the government could fight
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problem. I completely disagree with
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I will support my idea with examples. First of all, higher prices on hamburgers and pizzas
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, who couldn’t imagine their lives without
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. Some of them would pay a fortune to taste a favourite junk
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others would cook it simply at home in order to overcome the regulations. Another reason why I disagree is that forbidden fruit is sweet.
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won’t stop finding ways to deal with these strict rules. Probably, the implementation of begged taxes could even cause serious strikes.
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, a tax solution could help some
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to give up on junk
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, because they wouldn’t be ready to pay more for
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pleasure. In conclusion, I believe that imposing taxes on fast
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wouldn’t help as the only way to stop it may lie between the promotion of a healthy lifestyle and reasonable prices on fruits and vegetables.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public health
  • obesity
  • diabetes
  • heart disease
  • health outcomes
  • healthcare costs
  • consumer behavior
  • socio-economic backgrounds
  • ethical implications
  • public health campaigns
  • subsidies
  • regulations
  • nutritional content
  • healthier food options
  • government intervention
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