The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.

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The provided line chart illustrates information

the

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change in

prices

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average

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an average

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apply

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Copper

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, Nickel and Zinc in 2014, with data presented

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monthyly

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monthly

interval

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and on

percentage

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scale.

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, all kinds

average

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prices

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decreased from

January

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to June.

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, the

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increased between June and December again. When it

come

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to Nickel. That had the most significantly changed

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more than

Copper

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and Zinc

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6% in

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. And, the figure decreased to -3% in June. And

then

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, the

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had

big

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jump from -2% to 1% in November. When it

come

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Copper

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. the

Copper

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had little changed average

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daring

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during

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one year. It had 2% in

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january

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, their

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had

change

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to -1% in May, But, their

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decreasde

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decrease

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1.5% in December. In

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addition

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Zinc's average

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prices

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was 1% in

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january

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decrease

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to 3% in February. And

then

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, the

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increasde

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increase

increased

to -1% during

4months

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4 months

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jumped from -1% to 2% in November.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words prices, copper, january with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "jump" was used 2 times.

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4
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
26
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

168 words

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