The table below shows the consumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc.) owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The table provides information on the proportion of
household
electrical Use synonyms
appliances
owned by people in Britain over an eleven-Use synonyms
year
Use synonyms
period
. Over time, it can be established that the Use synonyms
ownership
Use synonyms
fo
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of
household
Use synonyms
appliance
has increased over the Fix the agreement mistake
appliances
period
. The highest Use synonyms
ownership
of Use synonyms
appliances
is central heating, which doubled the figures by the end of the Use synonyms
period
with the addition of a few Use synonyms
appliances
(telephone, washing machine, refrigerator and vacuum cleaner) Use synonyms
has
witnessed a strong increase Correct pronoun usage
which has
year
on Use synonyms
year
. The two Use synonyms
appliances
with the lowest percentages- video and dishwater experienced no sales in the first few years.
Use synonyms
It is clear that
four Linking Words
household
Use synonyms
appliances
witnessed a significant increase in Use synonyms
ownership
over the Use synonyms
periods
. By far, the largest number of people owning central heating has nearly doubled from thirty-three per Fix the agreement mistake
period
cent
in 1972 to sixty-four per Use synonyms
cent
in 1983. It was the Use synonyms
ownership
of the telephone, Use synonyms
Linking Words
however
that witnessed the highest growth rate Add a comma
,however
year
on Use synonyms
year
, with an average rate of more than 6% that almost doubled the initial figures. Television had the highest Use synonyms
ownership
of 93% in 1972 with fluctuations throughout the Use synonyms
period
before ending at 98%, Use synonyms
whereas
the statistics figures for households owning vacuum Linking Words
cleaner
were at 87 per Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
cent
in 1972, an increase of 8 per Use synonyms
cent
before the end of the Use synonyms
period
.
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In contrast
, Both dishwasher and video appliance was the Linking Words
last
owned by Linking Words
household
throughout the Use synonyms
period
, with some Use synonyms
period
witnessing no sales. The dishwasher had Use synonyms
witness
sales in 1978 of just three per Wrong verb form
witnessed
cent
, which remained constant with slight increases before ending with two per Use synonyms
cent
more than it Use synonyms
initially
began with. Linking Words
Moreover
, video Linking Words
appliances
did not see any fluctuations or changes with only 18% of Use synonyms
ownership
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at the end
of the Linking Words
period
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words household, appliances, period, ownership, year, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
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