The chart below gives information about how people aged 25-34 are housed in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on the main features,and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. The chart below gives information about how people aged 25-34 are housed in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on the main features,and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The chart compares people aged from 25 to 34 in the UK in terms of housing in the period of 10
years
(2004-2014).
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Overall
, the proportion of owners decreased gently through the Linking Words
years
and the number of people who rent a house increased gradually. And it's evident that at first the percentages of owners were threefold the renters.
The figure for owners experienced a slight decrease in 4 first Use synonyms
years
(2004,2005,2006,2007) and reached a little lower than from its first point around 60% to approximately higher than 55% in 2007. Before levelling at 41% in two consecutive Use synonyms
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in 2011 and 2012, there was a dramatic decline happened from 55% to 41% in 2011. After remaining stable till 2012, the number fell again to almost 36% and reached a new dip in 2014.
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On the other hand
, the number of renters saw a significant rise and doubled in 8 Linking Words
years
and stopped at 40% in 2011. Use synonyms
Similarly
, there was no change in 2011 and 2012, like the owner's figure and Linking Words
then
in 2012, the proportion of people who paid rent climbed to about 48% and reached a peak.Linking Words
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