Many feel that going to the gym is the best way to stay fit. Others think there are more effective methods. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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day and age, people decide to go to the

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the best way to keep fit

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others think there are more effective measures.

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writer will elucidate in the following essays

that

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why

others

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methods

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are more effective.

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, let us take a look at going to the

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is not as effective as other

methods

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, at the

gym

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there are a lot of facilities for all the exercises and instructors who will introduce

gymers

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gamers

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to the

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the

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best way to practice but if they want to have

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bargain, they will have to pay money for each month, that

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cost too much.

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, people who are practising at the

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need to pay

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apply

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tuition every month and must go to the fitness

center

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daily.

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,

this

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statement leads to when inhabitants are busy for some days that they will

lost

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their

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money that they have

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.

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, going to the

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provide

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citizens

a

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fit and slim body with muscles, healthy.

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, exercising with

another measure

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other measures

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which are free

such

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as jogging,

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do

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the

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yoga at home,

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lead

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a

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to a

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heath

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healthy

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lifestyle because both of

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this

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methods

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have an impact on all of bodies like muscles, heath,

endocrine

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and endocrine

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. Research has found that

gym

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concentrates on

improve

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improving

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muscles and

shape

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the shape

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of bodies, people nowadays

are focus

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on how to exercise amelioratively for all body organs. On top of that, it is not necessary to pay money and inhabitants not be bound by time

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practice

everywhere

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any time they want. Jogging is the easiest exercise for all ages. Taking everything into conclusion,

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or

another

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another method

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methods

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have their advantages and disadvantages but it can be seen that not only

gym

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is the best way to stay fit. I inclined to

others

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measures than going to the

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.