You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The given map shows
difference
between Add an article
the difference
school
in 1985 and nowadays.
Fix the agreement mistake
schools
Overall
, the most significant development is replacing the road
to the playing field by
Change preposition
with
little
forest. Another Correct article usage
a little
intersting
point is that playing fields Correct your spelling
interesting
occupies
less square, Correct subject-verb agreement
occupy
while
new classrooms
and fitness
Correct article usage
a fitness
center
with pool
appeared.
In 1985, Correct article usage
a pool
entrance
and exit Correct article usage
the entrance
road
was rectangle-shaped with car
park Add an article
a car
the car
on
the Change preposition
in
center
and contunied
by Correct your spelling
continued
rod
to the game Add an article
a rod
the rod
zone
. Playing fields occupied almost the
half of the territory. in the west side of the school complex located library and office room with Correct article usage
apply
small
car park and Correct article usage
a small
classrooms
behind them. On the opposite side of the road
located
Verb problem
is
classroom
block with 2 storeys. Correct article usage
a classroom
This
school designed
for 1500 students.
Today, Add a missing verb
is designed
office
and car park Correct article usage
the office
on
the Change preposition
in
center
of the road
remainad
in the initial place, even the entrance Correct your spelling
remain
road
became
curve-shaped. The Wrong verb form
has become
road
to playing
Correct article usage
the playing
zone
replaced
by trees. On the right from Add a missing verb
was replaced
this
trees located
classroom Add a missing verb
is located
blosk
, Correct your spelling
block
that
Correct pronoun usage
which
expand
and consistsCorrect subject-verb agreement
expands
3
storeys and new Change preposition
of 3
classrooms
. The territory later
occupied by Add a missing verb
was later
west
playing Correct article usage
the west
zone
now fitness
Correct article usage
a fitness
center
with Change the spelling
centre
swimming
Correct article usage
a swimming
zone
. Library
Correct article usage
The library
divided
into Add a missing verb
is divided
learning
resources Correct article usage
a learning
center
with Change the spelling
centre
computer
Correct article usage
a computer
center
and Change the spelling
centre
classrooms
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, classrooms, center, zone with synonyms.
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