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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The given map shows
difference
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the difference
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 between
school
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schools
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 in 1985 and nowadays.
Overall
, the most significant development is replacing the
road
 to the playing field
by
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with
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little
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a little
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 forest. Another
intersting
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interesting
 point is that playing fields
occupies
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occupy
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 less square,
while
 new
classrooms
 and
fitness
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a fitness
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center
 with
pool
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a pool
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 appeared. In 1985,
entrance
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the entrance
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 and exit
road
 was rectangle-shaped with
car
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a car
the car
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 park
on
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in
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 the
center
 and
contunied
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continued
 by
rod
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a rod
the rod
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 to the game
zone
. Playing fields occupied almost
the
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apply
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half of the territory. in the west side of the school complex located library and office room with
small
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a small
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 car park and
classrooms
 behind them. On the opposite side of the
road
located
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is
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classroom
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a classroom
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 block with 2 storeys.
This
 school
designed
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is designed
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 for 1500 students. Today,
office
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the office
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 and car park
on
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in
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 the
center
 of the
road
remainad
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remain
 in the initial place, even the entrance
road
became
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has become
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 curve-shaped. The
road
 to
playing
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the playing
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zone
replaced
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was replaced
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 by trees. On the right from
this
 trees
located
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is located
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 classroom
blosk
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block
,
that
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which
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expand
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expands
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 and consists
3
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of 3
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storeys and new
classrooms
. The territory
later
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was later
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 occupied by
west
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the west
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 playing
zone
 now
fitness
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a fitness
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center
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centre
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 with
swimming
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a swimming
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zone
.
Library
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The library
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divided
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is divided
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 into
learning
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a learning
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 resources
center
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centre
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 with
computer
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a computer
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center
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centre
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 and
classrooms
.
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