The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line
graph
illustrates the proportion of the elderly population aged 65 and over in three other countries within a century (1940-2040).
Overall
, the graph
makes it clear that at the beginning of the given time
the percentage of elderly citizens was the lowest in Add a comma
,time
Japan
while
indicators which depict the USA
are vice versa.
The illustrates show that, in 1940 the number of old people was almost 10 per cent
in the USA
and Sweden
respectively whereas
it was classified as only 5 per cent
in Japan
. By comparing others, there, in Japan
there was a slight increase which continued in the next 60 years and after the 2000s it started going up more and more. Add a comma
,Japan
That is
the fact that this
growth will continue growing and in 2040 it will have already been more than 25 per cent
. That is
the most sharpened change, which is seen from the graph
, which leads Japan
to be at the top of the list.
Between the given time 1940
, Correct your spelling
1940s
the
1990s the increases in numbers continued in both (the Correct word choice
and the
USA
and Sweden
). Throughout the time, percentages of the USA
left behind Sweden
by only 2,3 per cent
. After 2000, numbers in Sweden
jumped, ,
Change the punctuation
apply
however
it never took over Add the comma(s)
,however
Japan
again. The USA
will have completed the list by just under 25 per cent
which is the least in the graph
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Vocabulary: Replace the words graph, japan, usa, cent, sweden with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "proportion" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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