The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line
graph
illustrates the proportion of the elderly population aged 65 and over in three other countries within a century (1940-2040).
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Overall
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makes it clear that at the beginning of the given Use synonyms
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the percentage of elderly citizens was the lowest in Add a comma
,time
Japan
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while
indicators which depict the Linking Words
USA
are vice versa.
The illustrates show that, in 1940 the number of old people was almost 10 per Use synonyms
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whereas
it was classified as only 5 per Linking Words
cent
in Use synonyms
Japan
. By comparing others, there, in Use synonyms
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Japan
there was a slight increase which continued in the next 60 years and after the 2000s it started going up more and more. Add a comma
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the fact that Linking Words
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growth will continue growing and in 2040 it will have already been more than 25 per Linking Words
cent
. Use synonyms
That is
the most sharpened change, which is seen from the Linking Words
graph
, which leads Use synonyms
Japan
to be at the top of the list.
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1940s
the
1990s the increases in numbers continued in both (the Correct word choice
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left behind Use synonyms
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by only 2,3 per Use synonyms
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. After 2000, numbers in Use synonyms
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however
it never took over Add the comma(s)
,however
Japan
again. The Use synonyms
USA
will have completed the list by just under 25 per Use synonyms
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which is the least in the Use synonyms
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