WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: In many countries people have to pay for medical care, but some think that it should be a free service provided by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.
There is no doubt that these days the need for medical
care
becomes essential for everyone. The question is that if medical care
should be paid for by people or be covered by the government
. In this
,essay I am going to discuss both opinions and the rationale behind each one.
In terms of advantages, the presence of medical care
service
which covers all people is a must However
, the conflict is who should pay for this
service
in other words
Is it fair to make equality in receiving the medical service
which is covered by the government
? My belief is not. The reason given to support this
claim is the variance in the buying power for this
service
between the individual, As a result
, the governments should provide such
service
for individuals with low income and who can not afford
. Correct pronoun usage
itafford
In addition
, it's not only the government
's responsibility but also
, the charity and social associations. To illustrate those organizations could direct part of their resources towards medical care
services for the disabled, As the government
should focus more on the projects that should done by itself like education, road construction, etc. Consequently
, if full medical care
is covered by the government
it would take a big part of the GDP (the country's overall
income) Hence
, it would reflect negatively on the other national projects.
In conclusion, and based on the previously illustrated points I disagree with the statement, As
that governmental resources should be more directed toward the people who cannot pay for these services only.Correct word choice
apply
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion