The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.
The given pie charts illustrate the
usage
of water
in different cities and worldwide and in which field
the water
is used.
Overall
, in both cities, San
Diego
and California, most of the water
goes for residential purposes, followed by the usage
of water
in the industry area, while
worldwide the field
where water
is most used is in agricultural area,whereas
in San
Diego
and ,California the percentage
of the water
used in the agriculture field
is the lowest.
In the first case, San
Diego
uses 60% of water
for residential usage
,while
worldwide the usage
of water
for residential is only 8%,in contrast
, the percentage
of water
used in the agriculture field
in the cities given is almost the same with a difference of only 11%,while
worldwide the usage
of water
in agriculture dominates the chart with a 69%.
To sum up
, the percentage
of water
used in industry areas is quite similar as in San
Diego
and worldwide the percentage
of water
used in industry field
are the same, respectively 23% while
in California was 10 % bigger.Submitted by annadrezaliu on
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