The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.

The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.
The given pie charts illustrate the
usage
of
water
in different cities and worldwide and in which
field
the
water
is used.
Overall
, in both cities,
San
Diego
and California, most of the
water
goes for residential purposes, followed by the
usage
of
water
in the industry area,
while
worldwide the
field
where
water
is most used is in agricultural area,
whereas
in
San
Diego
and ,California the
percentage
of the
water
used in the agriculture
field
is the lowest. In the first case,
San
Diego
uses 60% of
water
for residential
usage
,
while
worldwide the
usage
of
water
for residential is only 8%,
in contrast
, the
percentage
of
water
used in the agriculture
field
in the cities given is almost the same with a difference of only 11%,
while
worldwide the
usage
of
water
in agriculture dominates the chart with a 69%.
To sum up
, the
percentage
of
water
used in industry areas is quite similar as in
San
Diego
and worldwide the
percentage
of
water
used in industry
field
are the same, respectively 23%
while
in California was 10 % bigger.
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  • proportion
  • households
  • significant
  • industrial use
  • implications
  • agriculture
  • geographical
  • climatic
  • economic factors
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