The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.

The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.
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The given pie charts illustrate the
usage
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of
water
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in different cities and worldwide and in which
field
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the
water
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is used.
Overall
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, in both cities,
San
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Diego
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and California, most of the
water
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goes for residential purposes, followed by the
usage
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of
water
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in the industry area,
while
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worldwide the
field
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where
water
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is most used is in agricultural area,
whereas
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in
San
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Diego
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and ,California the
percentage
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of the
water
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used in the agriculture
field
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is the lowest. In the first case,
San
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Diego
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uses 60% of
water
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for residential
usage
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,
while
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worldwide the
usage
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of
water
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for residential is only 8%,
in contrast
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, the
percentage
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of
water
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used in the agriculture
field
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in the cities given is almost the same with a difference of only 11%,
while
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worldwide the
usage
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of
water
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in agriculture dominates the chart with a 69%.
To sum up
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, the
percentage
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of
water
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used in industry areas is quite similar as in
San
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Diego
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and worldwide the
percentage
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of
water
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used in industry
field
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are the same, respectively 23%
while
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in California was 10 % bigger.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words usage, water, field, san, diego, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • households
  • significant
  • industrial use
  • implications
  • agriculture
  • geographical
  • climatic
  • economic factors
  • patterns
  • sustainability
  • practices
  • surprising
  • exceptionally
  • improvements
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