You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • describe the training course you want to do • explain what the company could do to help you • say how the course will be useful for your job Write at least 150 words.

Dear sir, My name is Kulwinder Kaur, Head chef in your organization. I am writing
this
letter to express my willingness to pursue a
course
advertised in our local newspaper to achieve some advancement in my field.
To begin
with, I would like to pursue a
course
named "Worldwide Cuisine" provided by the University of Toronto. In
this
course
, I will gain vast knowledge of a variety of foods
such
as Italian, Chinese, and Indian. Not only
this
but
also
learn about different spices around the world.
Additionally
, it
also
provides knowledge of various styles of decoration to present food on the table. I was wondering if you could get some paid holiday for 2 weeks so that I can put my whole concentration on training. It would
also
be appreciated if half of my
course
fees were arranged by the company. Since
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the
course
involves a huge variety of cuisine from different parts of the world. Going forward, It would help to increase the number of cuisines on the main menu which directly creates more customer retention from different communities. I hope you will consider my request with a positive response. Yours sincerely, Kulwinder Kaur
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professional development
  • training course
  • skillset enhancement
  • educational leave
  • sponsorship
  • reimbursement
  • knowledge integration
  • work efficiency
  • career progression
  • continuing education
  • team contribution
  • productivity boost
  • expertise building
  • industry standards
  • hands-on experience
  • networking opportunities
  • cutting-edge techniques
  • best practices
  • return on investment
  • in-house training
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