You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1
The chart and table display information on
tourists
at a specific resort in Australia.
Overall
,
Asia
and
Europe
have the highest percentage of
tourists
visiting Australia, with
Europe
having the longest stay of experience.
Asia
has the highest percentage of
tourists
with 37% followed by
Europe
at 35%. In comparison, The US and other
regions
have 18% and 10% respectively, which is almost four times less than
Asia
.
Tourists
from
Asia
and other
regions
have the least number of stay which is 7 and 10 days respectively, compared to
Europe
regions
which has the longest stay at 16 days. The most popular accommodation aside from the hotel is camping or caravan. Most of the activities done by Asian and American
tourists
are sightseeing
whereas
tourists
from
Europe
and other
regions
go swimming/sunbathing and surfing respectively.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, asia, europe, regions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 3 times.
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