You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

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The chart and table display information on

tourists

at a specific resort in Australia.

Overall

Asia

and

Europe

have the highest percentage of

tourists

visiting Australia, with

Europe

having the longest stay of experience.

Asia

has the highest percentage of

tourists

with 37% followed by

Europe

at 35%. In comparison, The US and other

regions

have 18% and 10% respectively, which is almost four times less than

Asia

Tourists

from

Asia

and other

regions

have the least number of stay which is 7 and 10 days respectively, compared to

Europe

regions

which has the longest stay at 16 days. The most popular accommodation aside from the hotel is camping or caravan. Most of the activities done by Asian and American

tourists

are sightseeing

whereas

tourists

from

Europe

and other

regions

go swimming/sunbathing and surfing respectively.

Submitted by edcmng2005 on Tue Sep 05 2023

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Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, asia, europe, regions with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 3 times.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

135 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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