The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019, Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given graphs number of hours of housework per week decreased dramatically from 50 to 15, and
represents
information about changes Change the verb form
represent
of
electrical technique and spent time Change preposition
in
on
doing housework in households in one country over Change preposition
apply
period
of 92 years.
Add an article
a period
Overall
percentage of Add an article
The overall
household
with technologies increased during Fix the agreement mistake
households
this
period, and the greatest growth had
Verb problem
was in
refrigerator
, Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
furthermore
number of hours decreased dramatically.
It can be clearly observed that washing machine
had increased almost all Fix the agreement mistake
machines
time
, from 40 Correct article usage
the time
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
until
approximately75 Change preposition
to
percent
, in Change the spelling
per cent
1980
Change the article
the 1980
year
it had decreased. Vacuum cleaner
did not reach 100 Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
percent
until 2000 year
.
It could be noticed that refrigerator
increased significantly until approximately 1980 Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
year
, in this
year
it reached 100 percent
and held Change the spelling
per cent
this
position until the end.
It is interesting to note thatChange the article
the
than
had Replace the word
then
decline
slowly. In 2019 hours per week were 10.Wrong verb form
declined
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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