The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local are is not working properly. This is causing problems you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter •Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly •Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours •Suggest what should be done about the problem

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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to express my concern regarding the poor collection of garbage in my area. Which is the second Street of Modara, Galle. My name is Achint Ishara. I am living in the No 30 House The First one is that the regular rules and regulations are conducted by the local council that the labourers should come to the every Monday Wednesday, and Saturday for collecting to the recycling materials.

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, the non-degradables are brought every Sunday. But unfortunately, they are not coming to our street on that particular day.

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, they are

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available in our city only on Monday and Sunday. To be honest, we are facing a lot of problems

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litter collection. Because of

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, mosquito breeding places are arising, some animals are habitats in our area

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as street dogs, and rats. I would like to recommend some possible measures to prevent

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. The first one is that we can start a new community to maintain

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problem

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as garbage collection, some voluntary programmes to clean our area and so on. I would highly appreciate it if you would take any action to resolve

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. Hopefully, I will receive positive feedback. Thank you in advance. Yours faithfully, Achini.

shainikellapathaTue Sep 05 2023

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task response

Focus on addressing the specific issues with the garbage collection system and its impact on the community. Provide a clear and detailed description of the problems faced.

coherence and cohesion

Ensure that the greeting and closing are formal and appropriate for a letter to a local council. Use 'Dear Sir/Madam' as the standard greeting and close with 'Yours faithfully' or 'Sincerely'

coherence and cohesion

Organize your ideas into separate paragraphs, each focusing on a single aspect of the issue and its impact. This will enhance the clarity and logical structure of the letter.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

10 paragraphs

214 words

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