Money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. Governments could better spend this money on other things to benefit the nation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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exploration has a growing interest, as money is spent on Use synonyms
space
travelling, it opens up new areas to discover. Use synonyms
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instead
of spending money on Linking Words
space
travel, governments should distribute financial resources to improve the well-being of the nation. I completely agree that financial support should be invested in our society to improve the standard of living in each country.
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Initially
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according to
the hard work of scientists in the field of Linking Words
space
exploration, more and more possibilities are available for journeys to other planets in the universe, Use synonyms
such
as fulfilling the life-long dream of travelling to Mars or conducting Linking Words
further
experiments. These luxurious voyages are affordable only for a few affluent Linking Words
people
. Everyone has the right to decide about their own income and how to spend; Use synonyms
however
, Linking Words
this
should not be a Linking Words
government
responsibility.
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, humankind still has to face significant problems, Linking Words
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as natural disasters, diseases, and viruses, Linking Words
as well as
millions of Linking Words
people
in third-world Use synonyms
countries
suffering from famine or insufficient water purity. Use synonyms
Besides
, the social security system and accessibility to Linking Words
education
are not available for everyone in some Use synonyms
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.
One possible solution would be to distribute tax income and other funds so that the Use synonyms
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people
by providing access to free higher Use synonyms
education
and medical care. Some Use synonyms
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as a consequence
the standard of living would significantly increase.
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Furthermore
, there is research and investment in sustainability aimed at decreasing global warming to prevent natural disasters. Another possible solution would be to spend Linking Words
government
funds on Use synonyms
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experiment in order to increase the security of mankind. Linking Words
For instance
, nowadays we see an increasing number of tsunamis hitting oceanic Linking Words
countries
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such
as Indonesia, where natural disasters have fatal consequences. Cooperation between Linking Words
countries
and the allocation of Use synonyms
government
resources would enhance sustainability and, Use synonyms
as a result
, save lives.
In conclusion, exploration of the universe is a new area, Linking Words
nevertheless
extremely costly, and probably would not be worth spending an exorbitant amount of money on it. In my point of view, Linking Words
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, health care, building an advanced social security system Use synonyms
as well as
improving sustainability would be extraordinarily beneficial for all nations.Linking Words
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