Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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a successful way for sellers,

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not paying attention to them by individuals because when we see something a lot, our

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starts to ignore it. In

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essay, these two ideas and mine will be discussed. In terms of gaining attention from buyers and selling products, producers spend a staggering amount of money on ads to cast their goods throughout the world,

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through TVs, magazines, billboards etc.

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way of marketing has been chosen by many huge and small corporations which is obviously a successful trick in my opinion, If

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isn’t the right thing to do,

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why these companies

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doing

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? People trust products that they have known before. Being familiar with the brand and shape of products can lead us to trust it.

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, the fact that similar stimuli are ignored by the

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the reason of it is that our

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is designed to save most of its energy throughout the day,

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why advertisements are still useful?

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, if a TV gum advertisement indicates that it is a sugar-free gum ,

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we don’t listen to it we are still hearing,

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surely has impacts on our

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. It is called “Subliminal stimulus” and even if we don’t want to be fooled by marketers, we are always under the influence of marketing sections. In conclusion, paying attention to advertisements is not the case at all. We will be under the shadows of consuming culture, which includes ads that are designed well enough to change our attitude toward being a brainwashed consumer.

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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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consumerism
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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Your opinion

Eventually, technology will solve the most important environmental problems the world faces today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays most people learn academic study in university, but others think we should encourage them to learn vocational skills more, do you agree or disagree?

Some consumers are increasingly choosing to buy goods that are produced in their local area, rather than imported goods. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative trend?