Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Purchasing advertised goods has been said
is
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a successful way for sellers,
however
not paying attention to them by individuals because when we see something a lot, our
brain
starts to ignore it. In
this
essay, these two ideas and mine will be discussed. In terms of gaining attention from buyers and selling products, producers spend a staggering amount of money on ads to cast their goods throughout the world,
For instance
through TVs, magazines, billboards etc.
This
way of marketing has been chosen by many huge and small corporations which is obviously a successful trick in my opinion, If
this
isn’t the right thing to do,
then
why these companies
are keep
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doing
this
? People trust products that they have known before. Being familiar with the brand and shape of products can lead us to trust it.
Conversely
, the fact that similar stimuli are ignored by the
brain
, is true,
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the reason of it is that our
brain
is designed to save most of its energy throughout the day,
thus
why advertisements are still useful?
For example
, if a TV gum advertisement indicates that it is a sugar-free gum ,
although
we don’t listen to it we are still hearing,
this
surely has impacts on our
brain
. It is called “Subliminal stimulus” and even if we don’t want to be fooled by marketers, we are always under the influence of marketing sections. In conclusion, paying attention to advertisements is not the case at all. We will be under the shadows of consuming culture, which includes ads that are designed well enough to change our attitude toward being a brainwashed consumer.
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  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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