Many feel that going to the gym is the best way to stay fit. Other think there are more effective methods. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Over

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weight

is a big problem for many people nowadays.

to

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get fit, we have many ways to

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, some people think that going to the

gym

is the best

way

, but

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others claim that there are more effective methods.

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essay will show that gymnastics is the best choice to keep fit and take the other view about keeping fit the other

way

. On the one hand, we can buy a portion of food and drink very easily nowadays.

Also

, technology allows look at that and think it is so very modern but it can make us lazy too. The

gym

is the best

way

to keep fit, I said that because

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more expensive than many ways, it can boost us to have the motivation to we can do better. Gymnastics can help us burn calories fast do exercising more and more. ,

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Moreover

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it can help us have a nice body and balance our health.

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, when I was in grade 7, I went to

gym

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the gym

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with my daddy every day and

do

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the

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exercise for people under 18 so in the next month, my

weight

is

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low 1.5 kg, that

so

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interesting.

Conversely

, we can keep fit

by

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another

way

like

eat

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healthy food and drinking juice more vitamin C to burn calories, but just keep it balanced because if not, we can have a problem

in

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our health. Yoga is

the

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good choice too because it makes

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feel

relax

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and

feel

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better than before they do. My mom doesn’t go to the

gym

but she

also

keeps her

weight

so good, because she

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yoga every day. She said that she was relaxed and felt better in her health after she had done her yoga lesson. From my perspective, gymnastics is my best choice, because it

also

boosts me to lose

weight

than

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many ways I can so

also

. When I

pay

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for PT and

gym

fee

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, it was a lot of money and

i

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just

don’t

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want to waste my money so I

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ty

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it harder,

so

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it

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make

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me feel it

is

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the best

way

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, many

way

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ways

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can keep fit but just

choose

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choosing

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the

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own

way

help

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you feel best to get fit.