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Being a celebrity –such as a famous film star or sports personality. Brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity bring more benefits or more problems?

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Nowadays, all over the world, being a
celebrity
 is becoming very popular.
While
 some
people
 think the advantages of being a
celebrity
 exist, other says there are disadvantages to being a superstar. From my point of view, I think the first perspective is the most persuasive for the reasons discussed below. On the one hand, as far as being a
celebrity
 is concerned,
firstly
, to a large extent, no matter in the world you live
, you
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 can get notoriety and success,
due to
 the
fact
 that
millions
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people
 watching you
at
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the television and resulting in the
fact
 that they want to be you.
In addition
, and most importantly for me, you can have access easily at some party or event, on account of the
fact
 that you
brings
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 more
people
 and advertising, leading to enjoying easily.
For example
, famous
people
 get an invitation
for
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to
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Canne
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 festival in France
while
 common
people
 cannot have access.
On the other hand
, there are reasons that being a
celebrity
 has many disadvantages. First and foremost, by and large, you cannot do whatever you want
due to
 the
fact
 that each movement that you doing, is followed by
millions
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peoples
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, owing to hide yourself to keep a private life.
Secondly
, when you are famous,
paparazzi
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the paparazzi
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following
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 you everywhere and
trying
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try
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 to catch bad pictures
for
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of
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the
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apply
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gossips
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newspapers
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in newspapers
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 or social media. In conclusion,
while
 some
people
 think that being a
celebrity
 has many advantages, others hold a different opinion. In my opinion, to some extent, the first perspective is the most persuasive for the abovementioned reasons.
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