Many feel that going to the gym is the best way to stay fit. Others think there are more effective methods. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is believed that

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stay

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staying

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fit by going to the fitness

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central

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is the best choice

while

others think there are a

lot

of methods better.

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writer

agree

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with

this

statement because there

are

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more equipment than outside. On the one hand, going to the gym can help you to train correctly because there are a

lot

of professional people there who can guide you

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lot

of

exercise

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to practice.

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, there are a

lot

of gesture effectively to do in the fitness centre, other people can help you to know how to do these

exercise

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, so you keep fit better than training outside.

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, going to the fitness centre can give you a beautiful shape, workout in

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right way can help your body evenness on every part.

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you

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workout

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work out

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for your hands

much

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apply

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may

be make

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your hands bigger than

other part

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another part

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of your body,

it

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can break the harmony of your shape.

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go

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out for training is not a bad choice, you can save a

lot

of money

to buy

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by buying

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membership

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a membership

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. In fact, there is a large amount of money that you

spent

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on buying

ticket

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to a gym and you don’t have to pay if you

workout

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work

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outside. What is more, going out for training

instead

of going to the athletic club can help you manage your time better,

training

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train

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anytime if you want and be independent. In conclusion, there are a

lot

of

way

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ways

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to keep fit effectively,

going

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and going

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to a gym is the best method

with

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for

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everybody.