The bar chart shows the average size class in primary schools and lower secondary schools in 6 countries compared to the world average in 2006.

The bar chart shows the average size class in primary schools and lower secondary schools in 6 countries compared to the world average in 2006.
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The bar chart below demonstrates the average
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of
students
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per
class
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in primary and lower secondary
schools
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in South Korea, Japan, the UK,
Mexico
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, Denmark, Iceland and the rest part of the world in 2006.
Overall
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, South Korea`s classes are leaders both in primary and lower secondary figures,
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the lowest result in primary and secondary
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showed
Mexico
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and the UK respectively. In primary
schools
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, South Korea was a leader with almost 35 people per
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and
Mexico
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illustrated the smallest
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of
students
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(20). The world`s average
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size was 25
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. If Iceland showed the lowest gap between draws of 2
schools
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(approximately 1 person), in
Mexico
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secondary school
students
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number
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dominate to 10 people, compared with primary school
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. In lower secondary
schools
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, South Korea remained 1st with more than 35
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in
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,
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the UK`s
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does not reach even 20
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. Another interesting point is that primary classes in the UK and Denmark consist of more
students
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than in secondary school and the reverse trend is shown in other countries.
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