Many feel that going to the gym is the best way to stay fit. Others think there are more effective methods. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There are many individuals who have the point of view that

go

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to the

gym

center

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is the most effective solution to keeping fit,

while

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others have the different view that

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exercise at

home

is better.

This

writer prefers the former opinion

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than

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and will discuss both

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of

this

argument. On the one hand,

do

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exercise to stay fit at

home

is provided many benefits. First of all, the

people

training at

home

do not have to pay any fee because when they practice at their

home

, everything they need belongs to them. Not only that, doing exercise at

home

also

gives them peace and a private atmosphere so they can do whatever they want.

In contrast

, they do not have any professional trainer to teach them if they do not know how to do right. It might lead to injury if they do the wrong

gym

exercises.

On the other hand

, going to the

gym

center

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brings many advantages back to just staying at

home

. Nowadays, the cost when

people

go

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to the

gym

center

is affordable so most

of

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gymer

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can pay for it. If

people

go to the

gym

, they will be provided many equipment to help them stay fit.

Moreover

, there are many professional trainers

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paid money to help these

people

train more effectively in order to get away from bad

damages

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. For

instant

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, there are many treadmills, and dumbbells of many weights and the other

machine

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at

gym

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center

help them do easier and more effect.

To conclude

,

this

writer believes that everyone should spend time exercising at the

gym

center

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to stay away from overweight is better.

This

solution has many advantages and

really

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helpful for

gymers

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gamers

.