A lot of money is spent nowadays searching for oil. As the world's oil resources will eventually run out, it would be more logical to spend some of this money on developing new sources of power, such as wind and solar. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

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sources

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of

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have been the main focus of many industries over the

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decades and

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scientists

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already predicted the end of

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resource, a significant amount of money is still being spent to search new locations for

oil

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extraction.

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essay will discuss the cons of

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strategy

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and evaluate the benefits of investing in alternative

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of

energy

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.

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with, the era of

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oil based

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fuels is reaching its limits,

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it is crucial to start investing in other types of

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, preferably one

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more sustainable for the planet. Renewable

energy

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as

wind

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and solar

energy

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are among the most reliable

sources

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of

energy

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as their supply

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almost unlimited. Nowadays, there

are

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a range of modern technologies that not only harvest solar rays and convert them into

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but

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store them, providing clean electricity

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to an entire community.

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,

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turbines have been demonstrated to be a safer, cleaner and more steadfast type of

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than

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oil

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ones as its supply depends entirely on the

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, a never-ending natural resource.

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, the benefits of these alternative

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of

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outweigh the

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ones. New renewable approaches to provide gas and

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are not only more sustainable to the planet but

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economically better in the long run. Renewable

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does not release pollutant gases

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as carbon dioxide during its exploration and production of

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, contrary to the

oil

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industry

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it

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is known for being outstandingly polluted and contributing to global warming.

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, current technologies have drastically decreased the prices of solar panels and

wind

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turbine even for household use which enable small areas to produce their own

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without relying on

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multinationals. In conclusion, I definitely agree with the fact that more investment is required to

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develop innovative

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of power

instead

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of

oil

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resources. Alternative

energy

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such

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as

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and solar are more sustainable, reliable and easier to invest than before. It is time to stop petroleum dependence and seek for environment-friendly and

long lasting

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kind of power.