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Band 6.5

The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local are is not working properly. This is causing problems you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter •Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly •Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours •Suggest what should be done about the problem

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Dear Sir So I am Shohrux
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 I am writing
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 letter to bring to your attention the poor quality of
roads
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 in my locality. As a resident, I have been facing a lot of inconvenience
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 the poor condition of the
roads
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. The
roads
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 are filled with potholes and are uneven, making it difficult to commute. The situation worsens during the rainy season, and the
roads
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 become slippery, which poses a severe risk of accidents. So I am from Uzbekistan. Maybe it is certain you know that, our
roads
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 are not good. They were broken and destroyed by drivers.
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 I am appealing for it. In every morning
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 every evening, drivers attempt to make money by giving people a lift to their destination. If you could do that, I would be so happy. I am not going to abuse my country and
roads
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. Yet it is not fair because the heads of countries, and cities do not work. I do not know why. Yeah,
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 a true fact we have not own any cars but we will try to sort out the challenges.
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, I will explain my complaint.
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 segment was dug up three months before for some pipeline work. The
road
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 was not patched properly and a rough and uneven layer of concrete was dumped on these segments which made it extremely hard to drive on these segments. The surface of the
road
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 was
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 broken by heavy rains which created the craters, making the journey even worse. Most of the vehicles keep avoiding these concrete patches and stick to one side of the
road
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 resulting in slow-moving traffic. During the rains, the
road
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 gets easily flooded. That's why build another one or I will address to president.
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 in our country, all cars are increasing. If the anxiety is not solved, I will definitely go to the foreign to live. So I look forward to hearing from you soon Yours faithfully Mr Shohrux

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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