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Many doctors are concerned about the high use of computer games by children and young people. What mental and physical problems may arise from excessive use of these games? How could these problems be reduced?

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The increasing popularity of
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games
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 among the young generation is considered by the majority of scientists. The high use of
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 may cause some psychological and physical issues.
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games
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. First of all, as we know expanding demand for virtual reality
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 influence youngster and kids.
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 the online environment has great value today
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 young people can move away from their interests, family and friends.
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,
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 can take hours which reduces the interest in socializing.
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, gamers do not have time to cook healthy food which is why they prefer to order food from outside and
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 can cause obesity over time. Another important merit is that excessive use of
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games
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 has an impact like loss of visual perception. To solve
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 issue, families have to be more careful to take control over their children. Families must create chances for their kids and youngsters to socialize and they have to support children in getting new friends and
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 new intellectual activities to improve their different abilities. From a physical point of view, young people who play many more
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 have to schedule their day
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 can help to stay healthy at least.
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 is because videogamers oftentimes should go to the gym because doing regular exercises prevents the overweight. In conclusion, the problems that computer
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 create like loss of vision ability, obesity, staying away from other hobbies and becoming unsocialized with parents' help can easily be eliminated.
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