The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph provided a comparison regarding the prices of
Copper
,
Nickel
, and
Zinc
. The data compared figures in the
months
of the year 2014.
Overall
, It can be seen that the price of
Nickel
has been changing drastically compared with other
metals
.
However
, there were no changes in the prices of
Copper
,
Nickel
, and
Zinc
in the
months
of July, August, and September. In detail,
Nickel
started with a 6% cost higher than
Copper
with 2% and
Zinc
at 1%. In February,
Nickel
and
Copper
were noticed to drop its price,
while
Zinc
rose by 3%. In the succeeding
months
, the three
metals
continued to decrease their value most especially
Nickel
in the month of June with -3%. In July, it can be seen that there was a slight increase, but in the next three
months
Add a comma
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the value of the
metals
remained the same. The price of
Nickel
,
Copper
, and
Zinc
went up after a period of little decline in the month of October. In comparison, the cost of the three
metals
was reduced by about 1% - 4% more than it was at the start of the year.
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