The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The line graph provided a comparison regarding the prices of
Copper
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,
Nickel
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, and
Zinc
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. The data compared figures in the
months
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of the year 2014.
Overall
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, It can be seen that the price of
Nickel
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has been changing drastically compared with other
metals
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.
However
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, there were no changes in the prices of
Copper
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,
Nickel
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, and
Zinc
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in the
months
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of July, August, and September. In detail,
Nickel
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started with a 6% cost higher than
Copper
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with 2% and
Zinc
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at 1%. In February,
Nickel
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and
Copper
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were noticed to drop its price,
while
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Zinc
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rose by 3%. In the succeeding
months
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, the three
metals
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continued to decrease their value most especially
Nickel
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in the month of June with -3%. In July, it can be seen that there was a slight increase, but in the next three
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months
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the value of the
metals
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remained the same. The price of
Nickel
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,
Copper
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, and
Zinc
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went up after a period of little decline in the month of October. In comparison, the cost of the three
metals
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was reduced by about 1% - 4% more than it was at the start of the year.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words copper, nickel, zinc, months, metals with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 2 times.
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