The bar chart shows the average size class in primary schools and lower secondary schools in 6 countries compared to the world average in 2006.

The bar chart shows the average size class in primary schools and lower secondary schools in 6 countries compared to the world average in 2006.
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The bar chart gives data about the average number of
pupils
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per class in primary schools and lower secondary schools in six various countries (South Korea, Japan, the UK, Mexico, Denmark and Iceland) compared to the World average in 2006.
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, It is an obvious fact that South Korea was the first place for the rate of
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both at primary and lower secondary schools.
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the bar chart, In South Korea, the number of
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was around 33 for the primary section
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was roughly 36 for the lower secondary section. Turning to the primary and the lower secondary sections in Japan, the former was 28 and the latter was 34.
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, the lowest rate of
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in the lower secondary field was 18 in the UK and
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rate was lower by two
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than in Iceland.
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,
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average was equal to the proportion of
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for primary in Mexico.
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, in comparison, the number of
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for elementary and lower secondary school parts in the world was higher than in Denmark. Regarding, the former part was lower by two ,
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, the latter part was lower by approximately six.
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, the world ratios were higher than in Iceland.
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