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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems, as well as practical problems. To what extend do you agree or disgree with this statement?

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems, as well as practical problems. To what extend do you agree or disgree with this statement?
#country #language #disgree
Due to
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 rate of immigration in
contemporary
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 era, some problems are appearing for immigrants and citizens simultaneously. Since non-native people are not able to understand natives' speeches thoroughly and vice versa.
Although
, some troubles are inevitable,
but
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in my
perspective
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 most of them can be solved easily as simple as eating a piece of cake. Indeed I partially agree with
this
 belief that
says
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"some problems may be erected when a person is living in a country with a foreign
language
". In the following
paragraphs
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 I will shed light on some of my reasons. On the one hand, thanks to
technology
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 developments, there are various sorts of electronic and online gadgets which can assist individuals to realize
the
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foreigner
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foreign
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 speeches and speak in that
language
.
For instance
,
online
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an online
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dictionary
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dictionaries
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 that are
collabrating
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collaborating
 with AI (Artificial Intelligence), smart
google
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translator
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, and chat-GPT which
is
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 introduced recently, can cover a huge part of
persons
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 inabilities in terms of communicating with a non-familiar
language
. Actually, named facilities can listen to every
speeches
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speech
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 and translate it
to
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into
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 any
language
with
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at
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a an
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 incredibly high speed.
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Moreover
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, you can give your text to it and it will speak
instead
 of you.
Thus
,
according to
 these assistance things, most of the probable predicaments will be prevented.
On the other hand
, it is true that technology has solved a large amount of difficulties, but all of
mentioned
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 gadgets require some bases and infrastructures namely,
high speed
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 internet, enough knowledge to utilize them etc. To
examplify
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, imagine that you are in a job interview. In
this
circumstance
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 you can not use any technology to understand the interviewer or even to speak.
Hence
, you are rejected by them undoubtedly. In conclusion, it is undeniable that not knowing the
language
 of your
living
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country can carry some adversities
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some of
them
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which
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 have proper
solution
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solutions
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 and
rest
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 of them can not be solved.
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