The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1 Writing
The line graph
illustrate
Change the verb form
illustrates
,
the Remove the comma
apply
amount
of visitors
for
a museum in the UK in two seasons (Change preposition
to
summer
and winter) in 2003.
Overall
, the number of visitors
in summer
more
than Add a missing verb
is more
winter
. Change preposition
in winter
Furthermore
, visitors
prefer visiting the museum between 9:00 am and 12:00 pm and this
amount
decreased after the mid-day.
With regards to the amount
of visitors
in summer
, it began from 9:00 am and climbed rapidly to reach around 1300 visitors
at 10:00 am. Between 10:00 am and 12:00 pm, there is a slight increase in number of visitors
at around 1500 which is the highest amount
in summer
before falling gradually after 12:00 pm to 16:00 pm, then
drop dramatically before closing at 18:00 pm.
On the other hand
, the number of visitors
in winter fluctuated at around 450 to 550 visitors
from 9:00 am to almost 11:30 am. This
figure, decreased from 12:00 pm to 14:30 pm then
remain stable to 18:00pm.Submitted by halah.z.alamri on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, visitors, summer with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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