The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
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The line graph details the total number of tourists,
as well as
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where they stayed, going to a given Caribbean
island
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from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
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, total tourists rose considerably, and those staying on
cruise
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ships increased
in particular
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, overtaking
staying
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those staying
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on the
island
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itself, which underwent a more moderate increase. Visitors residing on the
island
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during their travels began the period at about .75
million
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, about 500,000 above those on
cruise
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ships. From there, the numbers for the former climbed quickly to 1.5
million
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by 2013, a full
million
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higher than the latter at the same time.
Then
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those on the
island
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were relatively steady until the end of the time surveyed,
while
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cruise
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ship passengers rose steadily, surpassing the former figure midway through 2015 and reaching a peak in 2017 of 2
million
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. The progressive patterns for visitors on
cruise
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ships and the
island
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were reflected in substantial gains for
overall
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visitors, which started at 1
million
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in 2010, grew consistently to 2.7
million
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in 2015 before plateauing through 2016 and
then
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increasing sharply to 3.5
million
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by the end of the period.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Replace the words island, cruise, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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