The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The line graph details the total number of tourists,
as well as
where they stayed, going to a given Caribbean island
from 2010 to 2017. Overall
, total tourists rose considerably, and those staying on cruise
ships increased in particular
, overtaking staying
on the Correct pronoun usage
those staying
island
itself, which underwent a more moderate increase.
Visitors residing on the island
during their travels began the period at about .75 million
, about 500,000 above those on cruise
ships. From there, the numbers for the former climbed quickly to 1.5 million
by 2013, a full million
higher than the latter at the same time. Then
those on the island
were relatively steady until the end of the time surveyed, while
cruise
ship passengers rose steadily, surpassing the former figure midway through 2015 and reaching a peak in 2017 of 2 million
.
The progressive patterns for visitors on cruise
ships and the island
were reflected in substantial gains for overall
visitors, which started at 1 million
in 2010, grew consistently to 2.7 million
in 2015 before plateauing through 2016 and then
increasing sharply to 3.5 million
by the end of the period.Submitted by emily870828 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, cruise, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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