You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Recently,
phones
have been used everywhere by
people
and have become a popular topic. Many
people
think that using mobile phone damage
people
like smoking and it is worth discussing.
However
, they still have not come to an agreement with each other on whether
People
should be banned from using
phones
in some places like smoking or not. Whatever each side of the argument thinks, I strongly agree that mobile
phones
must be forbidden in certain places. There are many reasons why ı think so.
To begin
with, bonds between
people
break down by mobile
phones
, especially communication.
Therefore
, sometimes, they can not listen to each other and they play only on
phones
. Nowadays, we look around, and the
people
in the cafe chatting less than in the past. Another reason for
this
is that several information like secrets can be shared with other
people
or another country. A good example of
this
is that, in exam time some students take a picture of the exam paper via
phones
and send their friends.
On the other hand
, many
people
oppose my idea. First of all, They can find beneficial material for
people
.
Moreover
, it is not only important for
people
but
also
it is a huge invention for the world
due to
mobile
phones
offering
people
many opportunities.
For example
,
people
know the daily news even instantly new thanks to mobile
phones
.
Secondly
, Sometimes they get bored with the environment or
people
, friends, and daily life.
However
, the phone gives
people
enjoyable activities,
such
as playing games and watching movies
Capitalize word
Also
show examples
also
whenever they want, they access it.
To sum up
, in spite of the fact that mobile
phones
help
people
in many fields, they are very dangerous in certain places.
In addition
, we need to know where and how to use it.
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