The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007.

The chart below represents information about British emigration to different countries from 2004 to 2007. Looking from an

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perspective, it could be seen that people most prefer Australia for emigration. Australia was a leader

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emigration for all these four years from 2004 to 2007. In detail, talking about Australi in all years apart of 2005

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of emigrates was higher than 40%.

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, in 2005 the

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was a little bit lower around 38%. Spain is the second largest country of emigrants after Australia. In 2004 and 2005 the percentage of emigrants was almost the same nearly 35 percent.

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, after 2005 the

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slightly decrease and in 2006 it reached around 33%. The

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continued to fall and in 2007 reached 28

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. The

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of New Zealand represents

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. In 2004

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were 25% and in 2007 it was 20%.

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of people who moved to the USA showed the same

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in 2004 and 2006 25 %

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in 2005 and 2007 20%. France's chart was the most active. In 2004 the

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of people who decided to move to France was around 24 percent.

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year the number gradually increased and reached 34%.

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started to go down and in 2007 reached 18%.