The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia.
The pie chart and data from the table describe the number of
tourists
in Australia
by origin and several categories. The data from the diagram is presented in percentages. In general, most foreign visitors are dominated by people from Asia. While
European tourists
spent the longest day in Australia
compared to others.
From the pie chart, we can see the original tourist region that came to Australia
. Firstly
, Asia has the biggest proportion at 37%. Secondly
, the European tourist portion has only a slight difference compared to Asia'
at 35%. Change noun form
Asia
Thirdly
, visitors from the US only 18% and the rest 10% came from other regions.
Looking at the information from the table, in terms of a place to stay, Asian people prefer to stay at 5-star hotels. It is quite similar to American tourists
, they choose 4-star hotels as their favorite
accommodation. Change the spelling
favourite
On the other hand
, European tourists
and visitors from other countries prefer to choose camping or caravan while
staying in Australia
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