The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia.

The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia.
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The pie chart and data from the table describe the number of
tourists
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in
Australia
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by origin and several categories. The data from the diagram is presented in percentages. In general, most foreign visitors are dominated by people from Asia.
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European
tourists
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spent the longest day in
Australia
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compared to others. From the pie chart, we can see the original tourist region that came to
Australia
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.
Firstly
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, Asia has the biggest proportion at 37%.
Secondly
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, the European tourist portion has only a slight difference compared to
Asia'
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Asia
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at 35%.
Thirdly
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, visitors from the US only 18% and the rest 10% came from other regions. Looking at the information from the table, in terms of a place to stay, Asian people prefer to stay at 5-star hotels. It is quite similar to American
tourists
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, they choose 4-star hotels as their
favorite
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accommodation.
On the other hand
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, European
tourists
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and visitors from other countries prefer to choose camping or caravan
while
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staying in
Australia
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, australia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Tourist influx
  • Peak season
  • Demographic information
  • Fluctuations
  • Duration of stay
  • Preferred accommodations
  • Analyze
  • Trends
  • Patterns
  • Compare and contrast
  • Speculate
  • Marketing campaigns
  • Management
  • Data
  • Notable
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