Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter: • suggest how you could help her in her home • say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available
Dear Mrs. Barrett
I am writing to the advert you have posted recently to inform you that I would like to be considered for the position you are offering for the next summer.
As next summer, I am going to stay in town, I can do some of your stuff. I have prior experience in cleaning the house because I worked for a housing service company for 1 year when I came here.
Also
, I have previous experience in babysitting. As a result
, I could take care of your child if you would like to.
Honestly, I am saving money for the holiday that I have planned to visit my own country next year. Consequently
, it costs me a fortune to afford the cost of accommodation and flight. So, I am quite keen on working for you.
Additionally
, for next summer, I was offered a position in the hall of residents to be responsible for catering from 9 in the morning to 3 PM. Then
, I got a couple of hours as spare time. I would like to help you do your chores or any duties that you consider for me. I am available from June to September.
I would like to be considered for this
position and I look forward to hearing from you. Please contact me if you need any further
details.
Yours faithfully,
John SmithSubmitted by bb_emperator on
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Task Achievement
To improve your task response, ensure you elaborate more on how your skills and experiences specifically match Mrs. Barrett's needs. For example, mention specific tasks you can perform in her home such as cooking, gardening, or any special skill you have that could be of help.
Coherence & Cohesion
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Language Usage
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