Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you thing this is a positive or a negative development?
Currently, a vast majority of patients try other options rather than visiting medical practitioners to treat their illnesses.
Although
this
trend might have dome merits, I believe that its demerits outweigh its advantages.
On the one hand, some people
support alternative methods, due to
some reasons. Mainly, the various side effects that some prescribed medicines have, discourage patients from taking them. For example
, the medications which are prescribed by psychiatric for treating mental problems, such
as depression or anxiety, have a wide range of side effects like scary illusions, losing appetite, obesity, insomnia or over sleeping
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oversleeping
Consequently
, individuals avoid visiting their doctors, because they have fear
of taking the Correct article usage
a fear
doctors
suggested medicines.
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On the other hand
, I assume that using these alternatives may bring about negative consequences. Initially
, some of the people
who claim that can treat people
through some conventional methods, such
as herbal medicines, are just frauds who have not even basic knowledge about Correct article usage
the human’s
human’s
body, Change noun form
human
thus
they would worsen patients’ situation. To illustrate, some individuals are allergic to specific types of herbs and nutrition, and if the offered herbal combination contains even a little bit of that substance, it can cause a terrible allergic reaction. Moreover
, just
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apply
people
in health
system are able to diagnose major diseases by means of their own knowledge, or Add an article
the health
conducting
medical Wrong verb form
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test
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tests
such
as urine culture
, and no other option can do Fix the agreement mistake
cultures
this
crucial responsibility. To illustrate, some parents think that when kids have a stomachache it is normal to apply self-treatment and trusting
their own knowledge, Wrong verb form
trust
while
they
might be a serious problem like appendices, which Correct pronoun usage
there
requires
professional aid Correct subject-verb agreement
require
instead
of home-based solutions.
In conclusion, I opine that this
trend may not only cause some major health issues because of being seduced by unprofessional frauds but also
, might lead to wrong diagnosis
and late reactions, which might even be fatal. Fix the agreement mistake
diagnoses
Hence
, it is a negative development rather than being positive.Submitted by mohammadmgh1381 on
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