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The chart below show degrees granted in diffrent fields at the national university in the years 1990,2000,and 2010.

The chart below show degrees granted in diffrent fields at the national university in the years 1990,2000,and 2010.
#show #degrees #diffrent #fields #university #years
The
chart
 below
show
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shows
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 degrees granted in
diffrent
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different
 fields at the national university in the years 1990,2000,and 2010. Degrees granted at the national university
has
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have
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 4 directions,
its
Correct pronoun usage
apply
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computer
science
,
medicine
,
business
 and
law
. Given 3 pie charts.
Lets
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Let's
Let us
show examples
 start with
computer
science
 which was popular in 1990 equally with
business
. They had identically same
persantage
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percentage
 in 1990,30 .The remaining 40
persentage
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per cent
 was split between the two areas,
medicine
 and
law
.
Law
 had the smallest proportion in
this
chart
,only 15
persantage
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per cent
.
Medicine
 25 %.
Early
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The early
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 noughties had
trend
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a trend
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to
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in
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computer
science
,
i
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I
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 guess
,
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apply
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because 40 % out of
hundred
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a hundred
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 was his.
Business
lessen
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lessens
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 for 10 per
cent
.
Medicine
grow
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grows
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for
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by
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 5 per
cent
.
Meanwhile
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,Meanwhile
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 the
law
,
what
Correct pronoun usage
which
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 was
the
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apply
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unchosen in 1990,stayed the
sam
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same
show examples
,
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apply
show examples
but fell down for 5
persentage
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per cent
.Sad.
Finally
,the
last
 pie
chart
 2010.
Computer
science
 still
doesnt
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doesn't
 give a head start,with 45 per
cent
.
Business
,
that
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which
show examples
 in the beginning was on an alike
with
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to
show examples
computer
science
,
reduce
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reduced
show examples
for
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by
show examples
 15 per
cent
 relatively from
first
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the first
show examples
 pie
chart
 and 5 per
cent
 comparably the second one.
Medicine
 is 25 % same as
chart
Add an article
a chart
the chart
show examples
 of 1990 and the
Law
 is 15 per
cent
 ,
same
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the same
show examples
 as
first
Correct article usage
the first
show examples
,too.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, computer, science, medicine, business, law, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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