many feel that going to the gym is the best way to stay fit. others think that there are more effective methods. discuss both view and give your opinion.

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demands for a fit and healthy body, many

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that the best way to achieve

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goal is to go to

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workout

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others hold the belief that there are many more ways to keep our physique balanced and youthful.

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essay agrees with the first sentiment

due to

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and the professional support the

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dedicated to helping people exercise, the

gym

provides a truckload of professional facilities and

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for your workout. The compactly of those

place

are very convenient.

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, if you want to run come to it and run on a treadmill, want to improve some muscles go to the

place

and lift some weights and so on. Some of the

gym

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also

include

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of exercise like yoga, dance fit

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etc., that can help you to be more flexible and lessen the boredom of repetitive things.

However

, we can see how costly to go the

gym

is.

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the motivation, the scare of being

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by people and other social

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can be an enormous obstacle to going to those

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. So these people rely on other

way

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to keep their

body

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bodies

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well-build

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and balanced.

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, based on

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circumstance

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gyms are not

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sufficient methods

to

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fit and healthy. But these routes usually get out of the plan and do not work well. The writer of

this

essay say have a belief that being devoted to one purpose

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most of the gyms a professional group to provide help. From instructors to dieticians

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can help you move closer to the goal and lessen the

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from exercises by observation and giving

advices

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.

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,

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gyms which live on for one purpose

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the best way to give you a healthy and youthful physique.

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, the benefit of going

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gym

is

being

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demonstrated by the essay above.