The two pie charts compare the different sources on which children charity in the USA had spend and received money in the year 2016.

The two pie charts compare the different sources on which children charity in the USA had spend and received money in the year 2016.
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The amount of cash spent and the revenue sources for the children's charity operating in the USA
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represented by the pie charts for the year 2016.
Overall
, the largest medium of income was from the donated food, and the highest expenditure was for the program services. The other tiny fractions for both the influx and efflux were covered, and utilized by other sources.
Firstly
, for the total gain of $53,561,580, 86.6% of it was acquired from the given edibles.
Moreover
, 10.4% was from community contributions, 2.2% from the program revenue, 0.2% from the investment income, and the same percentage holds true for government grants.
Lastly
, 0.4% was from the other income. In relation to the previous, the major outgoing of money was accounted for by the program services with 95.8%
while
the remaining was 2.6% for the fundraising and 1.6% for the management and general.
Overall
, the total figure for all the previously mentioned areas was $53,224,896.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • charitable organization
  • non-profit sector
  • financial allocation
  • philanthropy
  • government subsidies
  • individual contributors
  • fundraising activities
  • expenditure breakdown
  • financial transparency
  • budgetary constraints
  • donor base
  • revenue streams
  • fiscal responsibility
  • overheads
  • sustainability
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