The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007.

The given line graph illustrates the consumption of

margarine

, low

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reduced

spreads and

butter

between 1981 and 2007

Overall

, the

margarine

and

butter

dropped all over the

period

,

while

a low fat spread had

upward

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trend. Another interesting point is that the figure

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low fat and reduced spreads first appeared in 1996.

To begin

with, a

butter

`s draw started at 140

grams

and raised

steadly

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steadily

to reach 160

grams

in 1986. In

this

period

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margarine

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margarine

declined from approximately 95

grams

to 80. After that, a

butter

figure fell,

while

margarine

lifted and intersected at 100 in 1991. Over a

5 year

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period

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margine

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margin

remained unchanged,

in

contrast

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butter

decreased suddenly to 70

grams

. In 2007,

margarine

and

butter

indicated 40 and 50 respectively. In 1996,

a

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low fat first appeared and showed

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increase from 10 to 80

grams

in 2001.

Then

this

line regressed

steadly

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steadily

steady

and reached just above 70

grams

in

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the end of the

period

.